英國(guó)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)范文

申請(qǐng)文章在申請(qǐng)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金過(guò)程中所起的作用遠(yuǎn)超過(guò)托福和GRE。要保證您的讀書計(jì)劃和推薦信獨(dú)樹(shù)一幟，獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金評(píng)審委員會(huì)的刮目相看，可以參考以下的范例：

　　Growing up in a modest village in China，　I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology；people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisions and personal computers。 But when my father gave me an old radio to play with，　I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what inside made such interesting sounds。 Sitting on the floor with a confused grin，　surrounded by wires and metal，　I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were。。。(有刪節(jié))

　　合理地闡述了申請(qǐng)者學(xué)習(xí)電子工程的動(dòng)機(jī)，學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī)是評(píng)審委員非?？粗械摹Ｍ瑫r(shí)，讀了這段文字，會(huì)使讀者沉浸在對(duì)童年往事的美好回憶里，借此打動(dòng)評(píng)審委員的心。

　　另外一篇修改過(guò)的文章開(kāi)頭用詩(shī)一般的語(yǔ)言寫道(有刪節(jié))：

　　。。。。。。I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child，　and I still remember how wonderful I felt。 I remember thinking，　“What esteemed men they were！　How hard they worked！” As I grew older，　this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity。 I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart，　kindling a love of science，　and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world。

　　結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)了開(kāi)頭，闡述了作者為什么要去美國(guó)讀書：

　　I never forgot my adolescent idol，　Maria Curie。 As I re-read the book，　another passage leaped out：　“She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries。。。 Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris，　the intellectual Mecca?！薄?/p>

　　For me，　the intellectual Mecca is the United States?！?。。。 I hope to continue my study and research，　as detailed below。 One day，　I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits。

　　我們可以想象地到，評(píng)審委員在讀了這位女士的申請(qǐng)文章以后，腦海里肯定能栩栩如生地浮現(xiàn)出一個(gè)好學(xué)上進(jìn)、充滿遠(yuǎn)大抱負(fù)的未來(lái)女科學(xué)家的形象，怎么會(huì)不拍案叫絕，全力幫助這個(gè)女士登上前往學(xué)術(shù)圣地美麗堅(jiān)的飛機(jī)，成為第二個(gè)居里夫人呢？